Saturday, October 17, 2009

Halloween #6

"Rooby roo!" brayed the arthritic Great Dane, painfully hobbling into the brightly painted van.

"Good job!" said the bespectacled young woman, her brown page boy hanging in her face as she reached over to give the dog a biscuit. She offered one as well to the unkempt young man sitting beside the dog, but he shook his head and turned away to look out the window.

"We've got a really tricky mystery today, Scoob," said the blond young man, driving the van. "There's been a..." His voice broke. The red-haired young woman in the seat beside him sobbed loudly and blew her nose into a designer handkerchief.

"There's been some really mysterious hauntings at your vet's office!" said the young woman with a forced cheerfulness in her voice.

"Ruh-oh!" said the dog. "Rosts!"

"Yes!" said the young woman. "Ghosts."

The blond young man pulled the van into a parking space at the vet's office, but no one hurried to get out. The unkempt young man beside the dog still did not say anything, his shoulders shaking.

"Ghosts," the young woman said again and sighed, unbuckling her seatbelt and reaching across to the elderly Great Dane, who was staring out the window with a mixture of trepidation and excitement. The red haired girl blew her nose again.

33 comments:

Kim from Hiraeth said...

Oh. . .

I'm not sure I can keep reading these! Beck, you can surely tell a story! The emotions you evoke in so few words is, well, amazing.

You need to put these in a book.

Kim from Hiraeth said...

I just read that aloud to my husband and it made me cry. I could hardly get through it. . .

Steph @Red Clay Diaries said...

Oh my gosh! That one took a second reading to "get it."

So sweet.

Fairly Odd Mother said...

Whoa! This was equally eerie and sad.

Sue said...

You are definitely adding to my Halloween experience!

=)

Candace Jean July 16 said...

Steph warned me to get kleenex before coming over here. I ignored her, and had to use my sleeve. Oh, my heart...

Awesome words!

Melissa from the Blue House said...

AWWWWWWWW!! I had to read this twice to get it too.... now I'm laughing out loud. HOW do you come up with this stuff???

Nicole said...

Poor old Scoob.

LEstes65 said...

Took me a minute to catch on. JINKIES!!!

Patois said...

Not Rooby Roo!

Suburban Correspondent said...

You are so sick! (she says admiringly)

Mary-LUE said...

I think you've definitely crossed the line... to the EVIL side... on this one. You are definitely evil. Poor old, Scooby Doo. It's time for him to get that bubblegum pink shot of Death into his veins.

Heather said...

Oh! Poor Scoob!

The emotions you evoke speak volumes to your talent as a writer.

Gretchen said...

I can see Velma at the funeral, reciting these well known lines by Auden:

"Stop all the clocks, cut off the telephone,
Prevent the dog from barking with a juicy bone..."

cindy kay said...

Noooooo.....!

Chantal said...

NOOO not Scoobie! Sniff Sniff!

Recovering Sociopath said...

This made me laugh so hard I startled my husband.

Laanykidsmom said...

Yeah, this one took me two readings to get - and then I was shocked. Not Scooby. I thought he was immortal.

Kyla said...

Nooooooo!

painted maypole said...

Do you think scooby will come back and haunt them?

CAQuincy said...

Not Rooby Roo! NOOOOO!!!!! Are ANY characters safe from your wickedness????

LOVED IT, LOL!

Stacy said...

Woo hoo! I actually understood this one.

(I mean, I liked the others, but not having kids, I had NO IDEA what stories they were coming from.)

Soul-Fusion said...

this almost made me cry :(

Christine said...

hahahaha!!! scooby gets old and takes one last visit to the vet...well done my creepy friend.

minnesotamom said...

Now THIS ONE I got...so sad...

Wendy said...

Nooooooo! Not Scooby!

I am loving these stories!

Chrissy said...

so sick and so entertaining. Has anyone suggested Curious George? Surely the Man with the Yellow Hat has some sort of hidden secrets....

kys said...

Ruh-roh!! Not Scooby!

Subspace Beacon said...

Could you also kill Scrappy Doo? That would temper my grief about Scooby.

Janet said...

I hope he at least got one last Scooby Snack.

Poor Scoob.

Jenny said...

Ohhhh, why, oh WHY couldn't it have been Scrappy instead of Scooby?!?!? He was the good one:(

Marcus Goodyear said...

Uh oh. Having just lost a dog, this one was true horror for me. Sad sad sad.

(But also fun.)

Reluctant Housewife said...

Poor Scooby.

Poor Shaggy.