"Rooby roo!" brayed the arthritic Great Dane, painfully hobbling into the brightly painted van.
"Good job!" said the bespectacled young woman, her brown page boy hanging in her face as she reached over to give the dog a biscuit. She offered one as well to the unkempt young man sitting beside the dog, but he shook his head and turned away to look out the window.
"We've got a really tricky mystery today, Scoob," said the blond young man, driving the van. "There's been a..." His voice broke. The red-haired young woman in the seat beside him sobbed loudly and blew her nose into a designer handkerchief.
"There's been some really mysterious hauntings at your vet's office!" said the young woman with a forced cheerfulness in her voice.
"Ruh-oh!" said the dog. "Rosts!"
"Yes!" said the young woman. "Ghosts."
The blond young man pulled the van into a parking space at the vet's office, but no one hurried to get out. The unkempt young man beside the dog still did not say anything, his shoulders shaking.
"Ghosts," the young woman said again and sighed, unbuckling her seatbelt and reaching across to the elderly Great Dane, who was staring out the window with a mixture of trepidation and excitement. The red haired girl blew her nose again.
Saturday, October 17, 2009
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Oh. . .
I'm not sure I can keep reading these! Beck, you can surely tell a story! The emotions you evoke in so few words is, well, amazing.
You need to put these in a book.
I just read that aloud to my husband and it made me cry. I could hardly get through it. . .
Oh my gosh! That one took a second reading to "get it."
So sweet.
Whoa! This was equally eerie and sad.
You are definitely adding to my Halloween experience!
=)
Steph warned me to get kleenex before coming over here. I ignored her, and had to use my sleeve. Oh, my heart...
Awesome words!
AWWWWWWWW!! I had to read this twice to get it too.... now I'm laughing out loud. HOW do you come up with this stuff???
Poor old Scoob.
Took me a minute to catch on. JINKIES!!!
Not Rooby Roo!
You are so sick! (she says admiringly)
I think you've definitely crossed the line... to the EVIL side... on this one. You are definitely evil. Poor old, Scooby Doo. It's time for him to get that bubblegum pink shot of Death into his veins.
Oh! Poor Scoob!
The emotions you evoke speak volumes to your talent as a writer.
I can see Velma at the funeral, reciting these well known lines by Auden:
"Stop all the clocks, cut off the telephone,
Prevent the dog from barking with a juicy bone..."
Noooooo.....!
NOOO not Scoobie! Sniff Sniff!
This made me laugh so hard I startled my husband.
Yeah, this one took me two readings to get - and then I was shocked. Not Scooby. I thought he was immortal.
Nooooooo!
Do you think scooby will come back and haunt them?
Not Rooby Roo! NOOOOO!!!!! Are ANY characters safe from your wickedness????
LOVED IT, LOL!
Woo hoo! I actually understood this one.
(I mean, I liked the others, but not having kids, I had NO IDEA what stories they were coming from.)
this almost made me cry :(
hahahaha!!! scooby gets old and takes one last visit to the vet...well done my creepy friend.
Now THIS ONE I got...so sad...
Nooooooo! Not Scooby!
I am loving these stories!
so sick and so entertaining. Has anyone suggested Curious George? Surely the Man with the Yellow Hat has some sort of hidden secrets....
Ruh-roh!! Not Scooby!
Could you also kill Scrappy Doo? That would temper my grief about Scooby.
I hope he at least got one last Scooby Snack.
Poor Scoob.
Ohhhh, why, oh WHY couldn't it have been Scrappy instead of Scooby?!?!? He was the good one:(
Uh oh. Having just lost a dog, this one was true horror for me. Sad sad sad.
(But also fun.)
Poor Scooby.
Poor Shaggy.
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