Saturday, October 31, 2009

Halloween, Finally

It Was A Dark and Scary Afternoon

My dog thinks he is a WWI flying ace, I told my mother. She sighed and stared out the kitchen window and told me to go play outside.

"But it's dark out today," I said. "And there's that weird buzzing noise."

"Just go outside, please," she said and so I go.

I hate playing outside. The other kids avoid me, run from me laughing and shouting insults. I stand alone, the shadow of my head making a perfect circle on the ground.

"I'm having a party," catcalls Violet. "We are having snacks and pop and fun party games and you are not invited." All of the other girls - even my sister, my own golden haired sister - titter behind her, their eyes narrowed with malice. The dark skies crackled and the sun was hidden.

"Last one to the treehouse has to kiss him!" calls one of the girls and they all turn and run, shrieking, their feet throwing up gravel. My dog and a small yellow bird watch me silently as I walk by and as I pass I swear they laughed.

There is a boy on our street I sometimes spend time with.

He used to be the Sunday School champion, able to memorize each week's verse, coming home each week with gold stars and roles in the church play. But lately he's been spending all his time alone, muttering to himself and dragging his filthy blanket behind him.

"See that star?" he says, pointing upwards. There, in the mid-afternoon sky, is a falling star.
"The name of that star is Wormwood," he says.

A bird flies overhead. "Woe, woe," it cries.

The little girls cackle and laugh.

"And the four angels who had been kept ready for this very hour and day and month and year
were released to kill a third of mankind. The number of the mounted troops was two hundred million. I heard their number," he says.

Everything was quiet. Then a loud roaring sound filled the air and a great darkness began to descend. The little girls stopped throwing rocks at a cat and looked up, their eyes big. My dog moved his flying goggles off his eyes and clutched the yellow bird to him.

"During those days men will seek death, but will not find it; they will long to die, but death will elude them," cried out the boy.

I saw the flying star come crashing down in the nearby woods. Something huge stood up, throwing a giant shadow that blocked out the sun. The other boy covered his head with his blanket, shaking.

25 comments:

heidiannie said...

Oh my! The Apocalypse according to Linus,retold by Charlie Brown. This is WAY past Halloween tales, yet delightfully frightening in a spiritual sense.
I've never really thought that "Peanuts" written for children- and this subject is certainly adultfare, isn't it?
Well done, yet again, Beck!
Thank you for sharing your talent and insight- and all the shivers!

slouchy said...

perfect.

planetnomad said...

I have thoroughly enjoyed this series. Do you have to stop? Couldn't you keep on, sort of a Breton "Tales Told in November" thing? Please?

We watched "It's the Great Pumpkin CB" last night, introducing it to some Moroccan friends. I am always SO HORRIFIED at the way the other children speak to CB! AUGH! As he says. But it doesn't horrify my children like it does me, which I find interesting.

Omaha Mama said...

Well done!

Gretchen said...

A perfect conclusion.

We watched Great Pumpkin on DVD last night, just like edj and I ended up explaining WWI to my children, who were most interested in the scenes where Snoopy is creeping through the French countryside, behind enemy lines.

Christine said...

love it!

Nicole said...

Poor old Chuck.

Thanks for the Halloween fun!!

Angela said...

Loved this. Your talent humbles me...but in a good way.

Sue said...

The perfect climax. Vive le denouement!

=)

Wendy said...

Taa-daa! (this is the part where you take a bow) Thanks to you, we will never look at children's stories the same way. ;o)

minnesotamom said...

What an endcap to your creepy stories! Those Charlie Brown holiday specials always left me wondering, "What the heck?" They still do. We watched The Great Pumpkin together Tuesday night, and I scratched my head yet again.

Sarah said...

Ack!

Ok, just because it's Halloween, do you really have to be done?

Suburban Correspondent said...

Poor Linus - he always did seem a bit haunted...

painted maypole said...

wah wah wah waaah wah wahhh

Mommy Melee said...

love it

cindy kay said...

That was chilling....

Jenifer said...

How was your evening? Just wondering how it all worked out.

You are getting so good at these tales!

Kat said...

I never liked the Charlie Brown cartoons. They were just too mean. And I was so thrilled that my boys were equally appalled at the way CB was treated.

Chilling tale, Beck!

Mimi said...

Fantastic! LOVE LOVE it, even though I'm scared and kinda looking over my shoulder now ...

His Girl said...

*pulls her blanket around her shoulders and pretends she did not get a little creeped out*

Teacher Mommy said...

Oh wow. That was...chilling. And not even very funny, but that's a good thing.

You really should be published, you know.

Patois said...

The freak mistress. That is how I will forever think of you.

Magpie said...

I bow down before your wonderfulness.

Kyla said...

AGH!

Spooktacular, Beck.

Reluctant Housewife said...

Brilliant.

I can relate to Charlie Brown... and that worries me sometimes. :)